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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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The baby is sleeping in a guiet and clean place. She is cleaning a dirty place. My scarf is made of silk and it's smooth. This box is heavy, another one is light. You should driving carefully because this road is rough. The party we had yesterday was a really great and noisy.
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  • Lígia
    Mochapoints: 17527  |  Teacher Score: 10957 (99%)

    quiet... you should drive...was a  really great and noisy...

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  • esteban
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    Very good!!

     

    "quiet"

    You should drive carefully...

    The party we had yesterday was  really great and noisy.

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