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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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I am a senior,i spend my last holiday in Thailand which is not far fromemy country-China.I went to Thailand by airplane from Yunnan.I was very delight that holiday,and i swim in sea when i have been in phuket island. This travel is about one week.It cost about 2 thousand US dollar.
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  • Carlos
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    good work :)

    "I am a senior, I spent my last holiday in Thailand which is not far from my country - China. I went to Thailand by airplane from Yunnan. I was very delighted (on/by) that holiday and I swam in the sea when I was in Phuket Island. This vacation lasted about one week. It cost about 2 thousand US dollars."

    in English, the word "travel" acts as a verb most of the time, some other words you could use are: "trip, voyage, vacation and holiday"
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