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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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I am a nurse. The woman is a teacher, She is not a student.
I am a teacher. The man is a doctor, He is not a nurse.
I am me a student. The woman is a bus driver, She is not a manager.
I am a police officer. The man is a teacher, He is not a nurse.
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  • Helyne
    Mochapoints: 3852  |  Teacher Score: 728 (100%)

    The woman is a teacher, she is not a student.  The man is a doctor, he is not a nurse.  Me, I am a student (or I am a student).  The woman is a bus driver, she is not a manager.  The man is a teacher, he is not a nurse.

    Very good!
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  • thisisamazing
    Mochapoints: 1219  |  Teacher Score: 60 (0%)

    I am a nurse. The woman is a teacher; she is not a student. I am a teacher. The man is a doctor; he is not a nurse. I am a student. The woman is a bus driver; she is not a manager. I am a police officer. The man is a teacher; he is not a nurse.

     

    After a comma, it isn't necessary to put a capital letter, unless it's a proper noun. Like if you knew her name. Then her name would have a capital letter. It's just like ella in Spanish. You don't capitalize unless it's at the beginning of the sentence.
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  • Kev
    Mochapoints: 3759  |  Teacher Score: 2071 (99%)

    I am a nurse. The woman is a teacher, she is not a student. I am a teacher. The man is a doctor, he is not a nurse. I am me a student. The woman is a bus driver, she is not a manager. I am a police officer. The man is a teacher, he is not a nurse.

    Ok, sigue intentando...
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  • Kim
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    good
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