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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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i am a chef.the boy is a twelve years. he is not a waiter
i am a police.the women is a white. he is not a tall
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  • william mulquee...
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    Please note: 'I am a chef. The boy is twelve years old. He is not a waiter. I am a policeman. The woman is white. He is not tall.'

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  • Helyne
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    The boy is twelve years old.  I am a policeman (or policewoman).  The woman is white.  The women are white.  He is not tall.

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  • ClockworkRat
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    You must capitilize the first word at the beginning of each sentence. 

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  • Dan
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    Capitalization was incorrect for all your examples.

    I i am a chef.

    H he is not a waiter.

    I i am a policeman.

    T the boy is a twelve years old. This example and the following two are not professions; they are physical characteristics of two people, that is, a twelve year old boy, a white woman and a tall male (could be a boy or a man)

    The following examples end with adjectives: "white" that modifies "woman" and "tall" that modifies "He"; there is no need for the indefinite article, "a".

    T the womaen is a white.

    H he is not a tall.

    Here are examples:

    She is a physician.

    The man is an actor.

    I am a teacher.

    You are a lawyer.

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