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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today is raining.it is too cold.A women is runing in the street.I think she want a raincoat and an unbrella. yesterday the weather was warm. All popel like the weather.
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  • Vaddy
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    Today it is raining. It is too cold. A woman is running in the street. I think she needs a raincoat and an umbrella. Yesterday the weather was warm. All people like warm weather.

    Submitted over a year ago
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