Describing Objects and their Locations
Instructions:
Describe the locations of a set of people and objects. Describe each. EX. The woman is on the yellow couch. She is not in the brown chair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 2
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I arrived in a street and saw a yellow house. The house had brown door. I went and saw a woman sitting on the couch. Asked: Where is Rose? She is in the room. I went up to the room. Rose is in the bed sleeping. In table next to bed, had flowers in a box. I closed the door and walked away.
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Excellent, Juliana! You wrote this submission like a story, which makes it interesting. You are really improving.
I arrived in a street and saw a yellow house. The house had a brown door. I went and saw a woman sitting on the couch. I asked: Where is Rose? She is in the room. I went up to the room. Rose was on the bed sleeping. On the table next to the bed, there were flowers in a box. I closed the door and walked away.
Great job!