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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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I guess, there are no any sights in my city, expert buildings, that were built by Japanese before the War. But there is really beautiful nature around my town. You can fish salmon, try to get some crabs or prawns. Once we were on the tip of our island, we picked oysters by our hands, then ate them right in the boat, drank shampagne and enjoyed amazing views. I think, the availability of delicacies and the nearness of nature make life on the island more attractive. Also you can see sea eagles or seals during your weekend, so welcome)
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  • sudsey
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    I guess, suppose there are not any sights in my city, expert except buildings, that were built by the Japanese before the War. But there is really beautiful nature around my town. You can fish for salmon, and try to get catch some crabs or prawns. Once when we were on the tip of our island, we picked oysters by our hands, then ate them right in the boat, drank champagne and enjoyed amazing views. I think, the availability of delicacies and the nearness of nature make life on the island more attractive. Also you can see sea eagles or seals during your weekend, so welcome).

    Лолочка, сколько лет, сколько зим!

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  • Matthew Levie
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    Молодец! Я согласен с sudsey, кроме этого:

    But there is really beautiful nature around scenery in my town.

    I think, the availability of delicacies and the nearness proximity of nature make life on the island more attractive.

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  • Javier
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    good job

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  • Anton
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    consider this

    consider this

    the hint of the century

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  • Earl Smith
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    Good, and I share the same view with sudsey.

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