My occupation
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?
A popular celebration in my country is the independence day. It is celebrated on september 15th. The celebration lasts the whole month of september in which people do many activities related to the ocation like the parade of lights in the schools. Houses, institutions and most buildings are decored with things representing the colors of our flag and the emblem.
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English Writing Exercise 
A popular celebration in my country is Indpendence Day. It is celebrated on September 15th. The celebration lasts the whole month of September, during which people participate in many activities related to Independence Day, such as the Parade of Lights, which take place in schools. Houses and buildings are decorated with the colors and the emblem of our flag.
Very good!
Very good, just make sure that you use capital letters where they are needed.
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A popular celebration in my country is the Independence Day. It is celebrated on September 15th. The celebration lasts the whole month of September, in during which people do many activities related to the ocation occasion, like the Parade of Lights, which takes place in the schools. Houses, institutions, and most buildings are decored decorated with things representing the colors of our flag and the emblem of our flag.
Your English is very impressive! Just remember that in English, months, days of the week, and holidays are always capitalized.
Good job! I agree with everyone above.
occasion not ocation
very good job
Excellent for a complex paragraph!
A popular celebration in my country is the independence day. It is celebrated on September 15th. The celebration lasts the whole month of September in which people do many activities related to the occasion like the parade of lights in the schools. Houses, institutions and most buildings are decorated with things representing the colors of our flag and the emblem.
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