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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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I've got a happy day at the beach of Dalian on last weekend. It's almost 200 kms far away from my home. It's cost me about 200 dollars.
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  • Alfia
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    Corrected version:

    I had a happy day at Dialian beach last weekend.  It's almost 200 km from my home. It cost me about 200 dollars.
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  • LIU.AB
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    对不起。只是我会说西班牙语， 不会英语。
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