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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 3

Staying at a Hotel

Instructions: Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

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I was on vacation in Ibague with my family, we were in a hotel called the springs, I reserve a room to share with my sister, free time, my sister was on the bed with the computer, while I ate a snack.
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  • Jamie:)
    Mochapoints: 4034  |  Teacher Score: 1109 (100%)

    hehe...it should be a nice trip hehe...well done ,,,

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Jose~
    Mochapoints: 5456  |  Teacher Score: 4061 (99%)

    I reservED.

    By the way, what's "free time"? Ocio? In this case, "leisure time".

    :)

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  • mishaikh
    Mochapoints: 335770  |  Teacher Score: 317121 (99%)

    In my las vacation I went to Ibaque with my family. We reserved a room in a hotel called Springs. In liesure time, my sister used computer in the bed, while I enjoyed snacks.

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  • charlie Buck
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  • Migue
    Mochapoints: 4756  |  Teacher Score: 227

    eu nao sei falar em ingles, sò portugues e espanhol.

    muitos beijos

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Fabiana
    Mochapoints: 13168  |  Teacher Score: 6197 (97%)

    Lis meu anjo eu só falo prtuguês e español, não posso te ajudar nisso.

    Submitted over a year ago

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