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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

Yuliya's submission: Average Rating:
You are a boy.The boy is short.Hi is not old.The girls is wonderfull.She is small.The man is tall.I am a not old.You are fat.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • kancalikaka
    Mochapoints: 5734  |  Teacher Score: 3690 (100%)

    good job done

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  • vikas waghmode
    Mochapoints: 261  |  Teacher Score: 63 (0%)

    Hi,

    Though you are new to english you have done good job.

    But still there is scope to improvment.focus on grammar & spelling also

    some suggestions

    Your sentence :The girls is wonderfull

    suggestion : if you are using plural then use are & correct spelling is wonderful

     

    Please feel free to submit your exercises

    I will always help you

     

    Regards

    vikas waghmode

    INDIA

     

     

     

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Abrinael
    Mochapoints: 11478  |  Teacher Score: 1316 (100%)

    You did very well, but there are a few things you could work on.

    Incorrect: Hi is not old.

    Correct: He is not old.  This is only a simple spelling error.

    Incorrect: The girls is wonderfull.

    Correct: The girls are wonderfull.

    When your subject is plural (girls), the verb is also plural (are).  :)  Also, wonderful is spelt with one 'l'.

    Overall you did a great job. :) 

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  • majedماجد
    Mochapoints: 1612  |  Teacher Score: 959 (100%)

    He is not old    ,girls becomes girl

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  • vikas waghmode
    Mochapoints: 261  |  Teacher Score: 63 (0%)

    Hi,

    use are during plural(are instead of is)

    rest work is good...

    best luck for further progress.

     

    regards

    vikas waghmode

    India

     

    Submitted over a year ago

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