A Shopping Trip
Instructions:
Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4
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The last time that I went shopping...I bought a cell phone for my sister and I went with my daddy.....we went to center comercial portal de la 80.
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The last time I went shopping
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The last time i went shopping..we went to commercial center
Excellent, Lis.
We went to the "Portal de la 80" mall.
center comercial portal de la 80.
[mall=centro comercial/shopping]