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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 2

Daily Activities

Instructions: Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7:00 a.m. I leave my house for work at 8:00 a.m. I go to sleep after 11:00 p.m.

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there is no doubt that i like to make a food for myself, i m student in foreign country and i have to make when i m in my room.
i m from PERSIA (IRAN) and i prefer to make our traditional food.
sometimes i invited my friend for test my cooking and all o them told me you can make a food very nice.
i usually used onion, cucumber, potato and tomato for making food.
if you go to every country you can see alot of traditional food and i think i can try their food because i try to used to different food.
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  • Aline Gurtovoi
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  • Flammarion
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    Very good. I suggest you to use capital letter to set frases, for instance: There is no dounbt.., and the personal pronoum, it is: I.

    ...doubt that I, like...

    congratulations.

    P.S. Your president Mrs Mahmud, have visited Brazil.

    Bye

    Flammarion

    Submitted over a year ago
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