Describe an area in your city
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4
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this is the official picture ,i took this picture almost one month ago in the library.
i have a short hair because the weather is very hot here that's why i usually cut my hair here.
i have a black eyes and i like this colour and for my facial hair it's almost simple.
i have a short hair because the weather is very hot here that's why i usually cut my hair here.
i have a black eyes and i like this colour and for my facial hair it's almost simple.
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This is the my official picture. I took this picture it almost one month ago in the library. I have a short hair because the weather is very hot here. This is that's why I usually often cut my hair here. I have a black eyes (I like this colour) and for my facial hair it's almost is rather simple.
Hello Jahan, how are you?
Nice work, very few corrections, here's my suggestion:
This is my official picure/photo. I took it almost one month ago in the library. I have short hair because the weather is very hot here. This is why I often cut my hair / have my hair cut. I have black eyes (I like this colour) and as for my facial hair - it's rather simple.
Keep up the good work (: