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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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On my last vacation I went to St. Petersburg. St. Petersburg is 800 km from my city. I rode on the train. My ticket cost seven hundred rubles.
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  • Ichhabe1katze
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    Everything was grammatically correct.

    Although I rode there by train sounds better.

    Great job :)
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  • mrlampp
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    wonderful

     
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