Giving and Receiving
Instructions:
Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2
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I live in Cairo the capitl of Egypt it is the most crowded govern in Egypt ,the most big important organizations, instituations , ministries ,universities,and schools are centralized in it , the streets are always busy and congested .
I have not visited any other countries yet , but I would very much like to visit a lot of countries ,like Canada , as I know it is a beautiful country , has a lot of spectacular sceneries and amazing great natural views .
I'd like also to visit UAE United Arab of Emarities ,although it is an Arabic country but it concider one of the greatest country in the middle east , they were able to transfer the desert into a green ,lively ,astonishing land , where peopl from all over the world love to visit it , not it full of shopping malls , luxurious hotels and resorts , exotic islands ,kind and nice people ,so it will be the trip of a life time...
I have not visited any other countries yet , but I would very much like to visit a lot of countries ,like Canada , as I know it is a beautiful country , has a lot of spectacular sceneries and amazing great natural views .
I'd like also to visit UAE United Arab of Emarities ,although it is an Arabic country but it concider one of the greatest country in the middle east , they were able to transfer the desert into a green ,lively ,astonishing land , where peopl from all over the world love to visit it , not it full of shopping malls , luxurious hotels and resorts , exotic islands ,kind and nice people ,so it will be the trip of a life time...
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