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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

charlesMiao's submission: Average Rating:
He is a boy.He is poor.He is young.He is fat.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Arunachal Sen
    Mochapoints: 1263  |  Teacher Score: 489 (100%)

    The sentences are correct, but should describe six different people, not just the boy. :) Need space between sentences.

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  • sstoever
    Mochapoints: 628  |  Teacher Score: 82

    This is perfect english!

    Short:

    He is a poor boy. He is young and fat. 

    Write more!

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