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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 3

Needs and Wants

Instructions: Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.

loumana's submission: Average Rating:
it's very simple to get to my house ...when you leave your house you must go to the beach ..okay ? and when you are near the fish's restaurant you must go right ..and then you walk on the beach during ten minutes okay ? and when you see a lovely pink house with a garden ..just near you will see a little way ..with coconuts ...
you walk in this way and you must arrived to a big white house ..with happy dogs in front of my home ...i 'm waiting you !
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  • Ricardo Henriqu...
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    you must go straight...; you must have arrived...; I'm waiting for you or I'll be waiting for you.

    I'm not a native english speaker, I'm still learning English, so I'm sorry if I forgot to correct something else...

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  • jb48209
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    fish restaurant or seafood restaurant

    alleyway or alley (from word in French: allée)

    I'm  waiting for you. (or) I'm expecting you.

    It's very simple to get to my house. When you leave your house, you must go to the beach. Okay? And when you are near the fish restaurant, you must go right. Then you walk on the beach about ten minutes. Okay? When you see a lovely pink house with a garden, just nearby you will see a little alleyway bordered with coconut trees, walk in this direction and you have arrived at a big white house with happy dogs in front of my home. I'm waiting for you!

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