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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2

Describe your street

Instructions: Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?

loumana's submission: Average Rating:
My favorite restaurant is a fish restaurant in front of the sea ...
The food is excellent ..and very fresh .
The waiters are very nice and efficient
The panorama est wonderful ! And if you are lucky the iguanas come
in the little garden near the restaurant's table !
Across the street from my favorite restaurant they is a forest and next to him a garden with coconuts trees, palms , flowers and iguana

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  • jb48209
    Mochapoints: 24086  |  Teacher Score: 19244 (100%)

    near the sea or

    at the beach or

    on the coast (on the seacoast)

    My favorite restaurant is a fish restaurant near the sea. The food is excellent and very fresh. The waiters are very nice and efficient. The panorama is wonderful! And if you are lucky, the iguanas in the little garden come near the restaurant's table! Across the street from my favorite restaurant there is a forest and next to it, a garden with coconut trees, palms, flowers and iguanas.
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  • Liz
    Mochapoints: 2625  |  Teacher Score: 1106 (100%)

    I agree with the comments of jb48209. In the first sentence, I think you mean to say "facing the sea".

    Well done. It reads very well

    Liz
    Submitted over a year ago
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