Going Shopping
Instructions:
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4
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I went shopping trhee weeks ago. I bought a pair of shoes and a T-shirt. It cost 400 reals to me.
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I went shopping -three- weeks ago. I bought a pair of shoes and a T-shirt. It cost 400 reals to me.
"to me" at the end isn't really necessary.
Good job.
I went shopping three weeks ago. I bought a pair of shoes and a T-shirt. It cost 400 reals to me. or you can say, "It cost me 400 reals."
I went shopping three weeks ago. I bought a pair of shoes and a T-shirt. It cost me 400 reals.
I went shopping three weeks ago. I bought a pair of shoes and a T-shirt. It cost 400 reals.
1. Pay attention to the spelling of three.
2. the words to me are not necessary in the last sentence.
Olá, Eduardo! This is very good except for one small mistake.
Below is the corrected version:
I went shopping trhee weeks ago. I bought a pair of shoes and a T-shirt. It cost 400 reals to me. me 400 reals.