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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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When I go in the park, I read a book. But if it is warm and sunny, I can play some sports or make jogging. I like to be at the park because of fresh air and greenery. It helps me to relax.
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  • skocoglu
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    go to park

     

    good
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  • qskwatsch
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    Hi! seems good to me....but I'm italian native. :) send me italian exerc. ciao!
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  • Boneman ♫♪
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    "When I go to the park, I read a book. But if it is warm and sunny, I can play some sports or go jogging. I like to be at the park because of the fresh air and greenery. It helps me to relax."

    Very good writing. I have suggested a few changes. Well done. :)
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  • João Bovolini
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    you are great!! :))

    just pay attention to what boneman  said, ok?
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    when I go to the park
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