Professions
Instructions:
Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6
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Kelin is a manager, he isn't a doctor. His wife is a secretary, she isn't a nurse. I am a mechanic, I am not a chef,but when I get home I am a good chef.woow
kelin give me a e-mail add, I lost it. I beg you, my dear teacher
kelin give me a e-mail add, I lost it. I beg you, my dear teacher
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I don't understand your last 2 sentences.
The other 3 sentences are very good.
You need a space between "chef, but".
Americans would usually say that "I am a good cook". A chef is someone who gets paid for cooking.