Describing Objects
Instructions:
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1
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There are two cupes on the table. and one is mine, and the other is my daughter. tea in my cup, and cocacola is my daughters. there are two chickes and a cup of water in the box, they are not happy I think, althought they have enought care .
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Several misspelled words: cups, daughter's, Coca-Cola, daughter's, chicks, although, enough
You did not capitalize any of the sentence's first words, except in the first sentence.
You also need to have the word "is" after the word "tea"
Good luck.
I love it! But here are my suggestions:
There are two cups on the table. and One is mine and the other is my daughter's. There is tea in my cup and CocaCola in my daughter's. There are two chickens (or chicks) and a cup of water in the box. They are not happy, I think, although they have enough care.
I love it, though, especially the caring for the chickens. Good work!
some problems with plural forms.. and I didn't get this phrase "they are not happy" WHO? the chick and the cup of water? it doesn't have any sense for me..
Spelling: cupes-cups, chickes-chicks, althought-although, enought-enough
I think in the first sentence you should have used a comma after the word table. I believe the next sentence is a fragment-not a complete sentence. It should go with the first sentence.
"There are two cups on the table, one is mine ,and the other is my daughters. I have tea in my cup. My daughter has Coca-Cola. There are two chicks and a cup of water in the box. I think they are not happy although they have enough care." ("...although they have enough care" is a dependent clause-when following the main clause in a sentence you don't need to use a comma)