Going Shopping
Instructions:
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4
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The last time I went shopping I bought shirts. I have three nephews. Three brothers. When the first one turned 18, I gave him a sport shirt. By the way, a beautiful shirt, so that the other twoo brothers liked it very much. So, what did I do? I gave an other beautiful shirt to the second one, and a shirt to the third one... Not much criative? I recognize that I wasn't, but I swear that they were very happy...
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The last time I went shopping I bought shirts. I have three nephews. Three They are brothers. When the first one turned 18, I gave him a sport shirt. By the way, it was a beautiful shirt, so that the other twoo brothers liked it very much. So, what did I do? I gave an other another beautiful shirt to the second one, and another (shirt) to the third one... Not much very creative? I recognize that I wasn't, but I swear that they were very happy...
Very good!
The last time I went shopping I bought shirts. I have three nephews, they are brothers. When the first one turned 18, I gave him a shirt, by the way, it was a beautiful shirt, so that the two other brothers liked it very much. So, what did I do? I gave an another beautiful shirt to the second one, and a shirt to the third one... Not very creative, right? I recognize that I wasn't, but I swear that they were very happy...
Very good.
That's good job! Keep it up!
The last time I went shopping I bought shirts. I have three nephews. Three brothers. When the eldest nephew was 18, I gave him a sport shirt. By the way, it was a beautiful shirt, so two younger brothers liked it very much, too So, what did I do? I gave such a shirt to each brother. Not very creative? I agree that I wasn't, but I swear that they were very happy...
I wish you all the best!
Excellent work, Floriana! I have little to add to the other comments.
The last time When I went shopping last time I bought shirts. I have three nephews and three brothers/ or whom I treat as brothers. When the first one turned 18, I gave him a T-shirt. by the waybeautiful The shirt was so pretty that the other two brothers liked it very much. So, what did I do? I gave bought an other two more beautiful shirt for my second brother, and a shirt to the third one other two brothers. Not much very creative, right? I guess not recognize that I wasn't, but I swear that they were very happy...