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Instructions:
Write five questions to the community using the vocabulary from this lesson. Ex. Is anybody reading a good book?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 4
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Hans is here. That is his car.
Stella is here. That is her car.
Excuse me, Steven. Is this your umbrella?
I am an air hostess. My name is Britt.
Paul is here, too. That is his coat.
Stella is here. That is her car.
Excuse me, Steven. Is this your umbrella?
I am an air hostess. My name is Britt.
Paul is here, too. That is his coat.
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written exercises
A complete these sentences using He's. She's or It's.
1. Robert isn't a teacher. He's an engineer. 2. Mr.Blake isn't a student. He's a teacher. 3. This isn't my umbrella. It's your umbrella. 4. Sophie isn't teacher. She's a keyboard operator. 5. Naoke isn't Chinese. She's Japinese. 6. Steven isn't cold. He's hot. 7. This isn't a German car. It's a swedish car.
B write sentences using He or She.
Example:
Helen/well Look at Helen. She's very well.
1. man/fat
Look at that man. It's very fat.
2. woman/thin
Look at that woman. It's very thin.
3. policeman/tall
Look at that ploliceman. It's very tall.
4. policewoman/Short
Look at that policewoman. It's very short.
5. mechanic/dirty
Look at that mechanic. It's very dirty.
6. steven/hot
Look at Steven. It's very hot.
Part A
1. Robert isn't a teacher. He's an engineer.
2. Mr.Blake isn't a student. He's a teacher.
3. This isn't my umbrella. It's your umbrella.
4. Sophie isn't a teacher. She's a keyboard operator.
5. Naoke isn't Chinese. She's Japanese.
6. Steven isn't cold. He's hot.
7. This isn't a German car. It's a Swedish car.
Part B
1. Look at that man. He's very fat.
2. Look at that woman. She's very thin.
3. Look at that policeman. He's very tall.
4. Look at that policewoman. She's very short.
5. Look at that mechanic. He's very dirty.
6. Look at Steven. He's very hot.
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1. Spellchecker: You had one misspelled word. This can easily be avoided before posting. You should always get 5 stars for spelling. Try spelling and grammar checker at http://www.spellchecker.net/spellcheck/ Also includes a thesaurus that suggests alternate words to add variety to your writing. Microsoft Word also has a spellchecker.
2. Effort: Somehow you did Part A completely right and did Part B completely wrong. Even though the instructions in Part B told you to use He or She, for some reason you use It in every case. It's almost as if a different person did each part.
Did you make an honest effort on this exercise or were you just mechanically going through the motions?
加油一点。
Hi there. Part one is really good, just the odd typing error. Isn`t a teacher, Japanese, Swedish.
But you have part 2 completely wrong. You write it`s instead of he`s or she`s all the time. Try to correct that and send it again
好的.
Written Exercises A [For titles, all the main words need capital letters]
Complete.... [All complete sentences begin with capital letters.]
Sophie isn't a teacher. [You missed this "a" out, but you wrote it in correctly in other example: it must have been a mistake in typing.]
Japanese [spelling]
Swedish [All countries and nationalities begin with capital letters.]
B Write sentences using "he" or "she". [The sentence begins with a capital letter, and the quotations need quotation marks.]
He's very fat. [All the sentences should begin with capital letters. You don't need "very" in English, unlike "他很胖", and your exercise did not require it.]
Man - he; woman - she; policeman - he; mechanic - he or she; Steven - he. [Because "Steven" is a name, it always begins with a capital letter.]
A difficult exercise, and a very good attempt. Look at Lee李's and olddub's comments too for guidance.
(Written exercises A complete these sentences using He's. She's or It's.) 1. Robert isn't a teacher. He's an engineer. 2. Mr. Blake isn't a student. He's a teacher. 3. This isn't my umbrella. It's your umbrella. 4. Sophie isn't a teacher. She's a keyboard operator. 5. Naoke isn't Chinese. She's Japanese. 6. Steven isn't cold. He's hot. 7. This isn't a German car. It's a Swedish car. (B: write sentences using He or She.) (Example: Helen/well) Look at Helen. She's very well.) 1. (man/fat) Look at that man. He's very fat. 2. (woman/thin) Look at that woman. She's very thin. 3. (policeman/tall) Look at that policeman. He's very tall. 4. (policewoman/Short) Look at that policewoman. She's very short. 5. (mechanic/dirty) Look at that mechanic. He's very dirty. 6. (Steven/hot) Look at Steven. He's very hot.
1. Robert isn't a teacher. He's an engineer. 2. Mr. Blake isn't a student. He's a teacher. 3. This isn't my umbrella. It's your umbrella. 4. Sophie isn't a teacher. She's a keyboard operator. 5. Naoke isn't Chinese. She's Japanese. 6. Steven isn't cold. He's hot. 7. This isn't a German car. It's a Swedish car. Look at Helen. She's very well. 1. Look at that man. He's very fat. 2. Look at that woman. She's very thin. 3. Look at that policeman. He's very tall. 4. Look at that policewoman. She's very short. 5. Look at that mechanic. He's very dirty. 6. Look at Steven. He's very hot.
(总之，你干得不错。有一点要考虑的是，当您输入您的提交，...不包括指示/例子。这将使每个人都更容易帮助您的学习和练习你的英语。我希望，这可能是帮助你，...黑鸟。)
written exercises
A Complete these sentences using He's. She's or It's.)
1. Robert isn't a teacher. He's an engineer.
2. Mr.Blake isn't a student. He's a teacher.
3. This isn't my umbrella. It's your umbrella.
4. Sophie isn't a teacher. She's a keyboard operator.
5. Naoke isn't Chinese. She's Japanese.
6. Steven isn't cold. He's hot.
7. This isn't a German car. It's a Swedish car.
written exercises （ B write sentences using He or She. ）
1. Look at that man. He's very fat.
2. Look at that woman. She's very thin.
3. Look at that policeman. He's very tall.
4. Look at that policewoman.She's very short.
5. Look at that mechanic. He's very dirty.
6. Look at Steven. He's very hot.
谢谢楼上的朋友们！你们辛苦了！
Hans is here. That is his car. Stella is here. That is her car. Excuse me, Steven. Is this your umbrella? I am an airline hostess. My name is Britt. Paul is here, too. That is his coat.
airline hostess; airline pilot
Well done!
Your additional exercises were corrected very well by others.