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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

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I went shopping last week. I bought a long sleeved frilled winter dress. It is acrylic, wool and cotton knitted. It cost 120 RON. This means 28 EUR or 41.32 USD.
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  • Vontrésa
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    Excellent job!  Your dress sounds beautiful. =)

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  • Jesús
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    Very good!

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  • KimW
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    Very good!

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  • June Nessler
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    Very good, Goldberry.  Some details below:

    I went shopping last week. I bought a long- sleeved, frilled winter dress. It is  an acrylic, wool and cotton knitted. It cost 120 RON. This means 28 EUR or 41.32 USD.

     

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  • jonquille
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    Very good. There are just a few minor comments.

    I went shopping last week. I bought a long-sleeved, frilly, winter dress. It is an acrylic, wool, and cotton knitted blend.(or: It is a knit blend of acrylic, wool, and cotton.) It cost 120 RON. This means 28 EUR or $41.32 USD.

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