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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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The last time I took a vacation was in july. I went to Hawaii. I went by airplane of course.
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    The last time I took a vacation was in July. I went to Hawaii. I went by airplane of course.
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    Well, done!  Just capitalize July.
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