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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1

Transportation

Instructions: What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?

Sophia's submission: Average Rating:
Hans is here. That is his car.

Stella is here. That is her car.

Excuse me, Steven. Is this your umbrella?

I am an air hostess. My name is Britt.

Paul is here, too. That is his Coat.

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  • Sophia
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    Hans is here. That  is his car.

    Stella is here. That is her car.

    Excuse me, Steven. Is this your umbrella?

    I am an air hostess. My name is Britt.

    Paul is here, too. That is his Coat. coat

     

     

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  • Albannach/蘇格蘭人
    Mochapoints: 13116  |  Teacher Score: 11437 (72%)

    你应该回答这个问题, 好吗?

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  • jongerow
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    Very good!

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  • knowhim777
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    coat

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  • warrenford3924
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    to xiaoxiao. thanks for asking me to review your submission. take care. from warren.

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  • tammytmw
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    When I go on long trips I travel by bus.

    When I need to get around in the city I drive my car.

    If I am taking a trip out of state I ride in the airplane.

    This is what they wanted you to wite.

    Don't worry you are doing fine.

    I am here to help you. 

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  • just1world
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    This is good, but the problem is that...you didn't answer the question!!!

    "What kind of transportation do you use to get around town?"

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  • phoquemyope
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    Quite correct, just don't capitalize coat... : )

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  • CatBallou
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    airline hostess; coat

    Excuse me, Steven, but is this your umbrella?

    Coat is a common noun, not a proper noun.

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  • stoneruls
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    Excellent!

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