Professions
Instructions:
Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6
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Whose is this shirt? It's Tim's. It's his shirt.
Whose is this handbag? It's Stella's. I t's hers handbag.
Whose is this car? It's Paul's. It's his car.
Whose is this dress? It's Sophia's. It's hers dress.
Whose is this handbag? It's Stella's. I t's hers handbag.
Whose is this car? It's Paul's. It's his car.
Whose is this dress? It's Sophia's. It's hers dress.
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四个人的职业是什么？ ("..the professions of four people...")
Hi xiaoxiao, I think this is a different lesson.
Hello xiaoxiao,
Just a couple of errors:
It's her handbag.
It's her dress.
The word hers is the possessive form of the personal pronoun she.
Whose dress it this? It's hers.
Whose dress is this? The dress is hers.
Take care,
Mark
P.S. I'm sure you know but, to make sure, here is the definition of whose. The word whose is the possessive form of the relative pronoun who.
Giskard did a good job of reviewing for you. I hope to see you back soon!
Very good . . keep working
Whose shirt is this? It's Tim's. It's his shirt. Whose handbag is this? handbag? It's Stella's. It's her handbag. Whose car is this? car? It's Paul's. It's his car. Whose dress is this? dress? It's Sophia's. It's her dress.
It is her dress. It is my dress. It is your dress.
whose - the possessive case of who used as an adjective
Whose umbrella did I take?
Whose is this one?
你好小小/ hello Xiaoxiao. Good job.
Please read Giskard's comments. Good luck!
her not hers