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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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1) The man has five clock and three pens.
2)The woman has five dresses and six green black shoes.
3)The girl has two bikes and a silver skates red.
4)The boy has five toy cars and one bike great.
5)You has on old car and two new bikes.
6)I have three white house on top of a hill.
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  • -Jᴏɴ-
    Mochapoints: 267635  |  Teacher Score: 260892 (100%)

    1) The man has five clocks and three pens. 2)The woman has five dresses and six pairs of green black shoes. 3)The girl has two bikes and a red silver skates red. 4)The boy has five toy cars and one great bike great. 5)You have an old car and two new bikes. 6)I have three white houses on top of a hill.

    I'm confused about colors.

    Are the shoes green or black?

    Are the skates red or silver?

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  • CatBallou
    Mochapoints: 151602  |  Teacher Score: 139367 (100%)

    1) The man has five clocks and three pens.

    2)The woman has five dresses and six green pairs of black shoes.

    3)The girl has two bikes and a silver skates. red.

    4)The boy has five toy cars and one great bike.

    5)You have on an old car and two new bikes.

    6)I have three white houses on top of a hill.

    Nicely done.  When you are writing about more than one item or person then you must use plural nouns.  Examples:  five bikes, six pairs of shoes, three bikes, etc.

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  • Lenny
    Mochapoints: 18887  |  Teacher Score: 3502 (82%)

    Nancy, quite good, I can not give anymore advice, as Jon and Catballou have addressed it all.  You are intermediate, think and read again before sending, you can be perfect.

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