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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 3

What are people doing?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.

Gerson Navarro's submission: Average Rating:
the woman is running on the road, with her sons, and the man is playing basketball , they are not sleeping in the house.
a girl is smilling with her boyfriend cus the boy is very fun,he is not sad.
You are working at the table with the computers, you are not eating.
I am trying to learning english here, I am not playing.
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  • Sara.
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  • Shoba
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    The woman is running on the road <(use no comma) with her sons, and the man is playing basketball.< They are not sleeping in the house. A girl is smiling with her boyfriend because cus the boy is very funny, he is not sad. You are working at the table with the computers, you are not eating. I am trying to learning English (The word "English" is the name of a language, therefore, it is what is referred to in English grammar as a proper noun.  Proper nouns are the names of people, places, and things.) here, I am not playing.

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    Very good writing exercise.  Don't be discouraged by mistakes, mistakes are usually a part of learning a new language.
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