Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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The woman has long black curly hair , and his eyes are sweeties. The man has a red mustache , the girl has long blonde hair , and her libs are beautifull, she does not have a curly hair. You has short black hair and me have short brown hair, I am not bald.
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The woman has long black curly hair and his eyes are sweeties.<(I am not sure what you mean by this.) The man has a red mustache,<(The comma (,) goes immediately after the last letter of the word.) the girl has long blonde hair, and her libs are beautiful, She does not have a (Using "a" means she has only one (1) hair.) curly hair. You have short black hair, and I have short brown hair. I am not bald.
Very good. Don't be discouraged by the mistakes, mistakes are usually a part of learning a new language.