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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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Tomorrow I will go to th library . I will reading here.
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  • aopaq
    Mochapoints: 4089  |  Teacher Score: 2231 (100%)
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    Mochapoints: 4089  |  Teacher Score: 2231 (100%)
    Good effort! Watch the blank spaces between words; there should only be one. Also if you want to say "reading" you must use the term "be" before it. I would suggest: Tomorrow I will go to the library . I will be reading there. Happy practising!
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