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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 4

When and where?

Instructions: Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

Renato Vieira's submission: Average Rating:
The woman is going to the beach this weekend. The man is going to work at seven thirty and coming home at six o'clock pm. The boy is going to the school at fifteen to seven and coming home at fifteen to twelve. The girl is going to the restaurant at six twenty. You are not going to the beach yet. You are going read a book now. I'm not going to work at seven. I'm going to the shopping now.
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  • cambow
    Mochapoints: 6360  |  Teacher Score: 503 (0%)

    This is excellent. The only problem is that in English it is called a "mall" not the "shopping". Shopping is what you do, the mall is where you do it.

    Submitted over a year ago
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