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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 3

Staying at a Hotel

Instructions: Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

lavoisier.bruno's submission: Average Rating:
I stayed in a hotel. Then I did make exams in another city. In this time I did be vacation then I feel free go to travell.
In the hotel I sked to receptionist which the hour will be to dinner , then the receptionist talk me about 8:00 pm.
Then I stayed waiting in my computer and studied about english on the website livemocha . lol
Other day I did eat breakfast in my bed. It's so good. lol
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  • Ericzsq
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    good job

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  • Ericzsq
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    come on

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  • Onyx
    Mochapoints: 17488  |  Teacher Score: 14829 (100%)

    I did exams .....

    I'm on vacation and am free to travel.

    In the hotel I asked the recepcionist about dinner time, the recepcionist answered dinner is at 8 pm.

    Then I used my computer and did some English lessons on Livemocha.

    The other day I had breakfast in my bed.

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  • Arvonius
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    I stayed in a hotel. Then I took my exams in another city. In this time I was on vacation then I felt free go travelling. In the hotel I asked the receptionist "at what time will be dinner?" The receptionist told me about 8:00 p.m. Then I passed the time working on my computer and studied things about English on the Livemocha website. One day I did have my breakfast in bed. It's so good.

    Hello. You have done some good work here. Please study the changes very carefully.

    You should put all of your writing exercises in a file on your computer hard drive for revisions.

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