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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 3

Needs and Wants

Instructions: Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.

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hi,my brother,you can take No.601 bus to Xijing station and than get off, you can find my house behind of the station.
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  • leilathegreat
    Mochapoints: 12700  |  Teacher Score: 2470 (100%)

    Hi xyz,                  xyz=brother's name         

    You can take the No 601 Bus to Xijing station and then get off, my house is behind the station.

    Peter 

    Clear instructions.

    Well done!

    Happy NewYear           

     
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  • Маха
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    Hi, my brother, you can take bust number 601 to Xijing station and THEN get off.   You can find my house behind THE station.
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