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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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The man has short hair. The woman has red hair. The boy has long hair. He has not short hair
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  • Erin
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    He does not have short hair.

    You are missing the girl, you, and me.
    Submitted over a year ago
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