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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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My vacation is being very good.
In my town has a lot in the summer sun, beach and beautiful people.
As of January 15 will go to another city, which also has a lot of people and lots of sun.
I will go to the beach of Guarujá. 'Il be in this beautiful city to the Carvival. Carnival is always a happy occasion and beautiful.
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  • Shon
    Mochapoints: 7990  |  Teacher Score: 1471 (96%)

    my vacation is very good.My town has alot of summer sun,beaches and beautiful people.I will go to another city.I will go to Guarujà. I'll. The carnival

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  • nickkifo
    Mochapoints: 10683  |  Teacher Score: 198

    My vacation is being going very good. My town has a lot of beaches, beautiful people, and gets lots of sun in the summer. On January 15th I will go to another city which also has a lot of people and gets lots of sun. I will go to the beach of Guaruja. I'll also go to the Carnival which is in this city as well. Carnival is always a happy and beautiful occasion.

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