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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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The young woman does not have a long hair. She has a short hair
The man does not have a white beard. He has a black beard
The girl does not have a straight black hair. She has a curly black hair
The boy does not have white hair. He has a black long hair
I have hair. You have a long hair
Submitted over a year ago

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  • steven
    Mochapoints: 48270  |  Teacher Score: 36972 (98%)

    The young woman does not have a long hair. She has a short hair. The man does not have a white beard. He has a black beard. The girl does not have a straight black hair. She has a curly black hair .The boy does not have white hair. He has a black long hair.I have hair. You have a long hair.

    very good

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  • carl
    Mochapoints: 134370  |  Teacher Score: 126929 (100%)

    very well done, but you do not need to use "a" in these sentences:

    The young woman does not have a long hair. She has a short hair. The man does not have a white beard. He has a black beard. The girl does not have a straight black hair. She has a curly black hair. The boy does not have white hair. He has a black long hair. I have hair. You have a long hair.

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  • Natalia
    Mochapoints: 3437  |  Teacher Score: 583

    Thanks carl

    i´ll have more attention :) ok?

     

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Juliana ♥
    Mochapoints: 11276  |  Teacher Score: 2168

    hueheuehieuheiuh

    obrigada Nathy tbm acho seus exercícios bem legais x)se cuide amiga um beijo :*

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  • wyatt4500
    Mochapoints: 69722  |  Teacher Score: 67330 (100%)

    Good...."hair" is an indefinite number (but more than one), like 'sand' or 'fruit' or 'sugar'...so don't use 'a/an'.

    The young woman does not have a long hair. She has a short hair.

    The girl does not have a straight black hair.  She has a curly black hair.

    He has a black long black hair.

    You have a long hair.

    Submitted 1 year ago
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