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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

Francilene's submission: Average Rating:
She has strainght black hair.
She does not have curly hair.
The woman has long hair. She does not have short hair.
I have blonde hair. I have no black hair.
The man is bald. He does not have hair.
He has long hair. He does not have short hair.
The girl has curly hair. The boy does not have curly hair.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • karlene
    Mochapoints: 3705  |  Teacher Score: 1614 (0%)

    I have no black hair. ( I do not have black hair)

    Excellent.

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  • *:) *:) *:)
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    I agree with Karlene.

    Nice job!

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  • Gulchira
    Mochapoints: 7246  |  Teacher Score: 1546 (80%)

    straight

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  • sisa97
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    She has straight black hair.

    I do not have short hair.Except this - perfect!

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