Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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At home I have some tolls like a bucket, a drill, a wire cutter, a paint brush, a roller, a tape, some glue, a hummer, wrenches, nails, screws, nuts, mop and rags.
I bought them in Hardware Stores (? I’m not sure exactly that the name of stores where usually people bye tools is right). Quite often I use a rag to clean a floor. As to another tools, I use them seldom. Last time when I use tools were a hammer and a nail to string a picture
I bought them in Hardware Stores (? I’m not sure exactly that the name of stores where usually people bye tools is right). Quite often I use a rag to clean a floor. As to another tools, I use them seldom. Last time when I use tools were a hammer and a nail to string a picture
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Very good, Nataliya. I will make a few minor changes:
At home I have some tools like a bucket, a drill, a wire cutter, a paint brush, a roller, a tape measure, some glue, a hammer, wrenches, nails, screws, nuts, mop and rags. I bought them in Hardware Stores (? I’m not sure exactly that the name of stores where usually people buy tools is right - hardware store is correct). Quite often I use a rag to clean a floor. As for the other tools, I use them seldom. (this is okay but usually would be different word order - I seldom use them) The last time when I use tools, they were a hammer and a nail to string a picture.
Good try.
At home I have some tools like a bucket, a drill, a wire cutter, a paint brush, a roller, a tape, some glue, a hammer, wrenches, nails, screws, nuts, mop and rags. I bought them at the(in) hardware stores (? I’m not exactly sure that it is right that the name of stores where people usually buy tools). Quite often I use a rag to clean the floor. I use other tools seldom. Last time the tools that I used were a hammer and a nail to hang a picture.
Happy learning!
I agree with "eyeguy 777.Just go on!
You did a very good job.
I am not a native English speaker, but anyway I agree with the changes proposed by eyequy777.
Good job :)