What are you doing this week?
Instructions:
What are you doing this week? What activities are you doing? When? Which days will be the busiest?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 2
 LUCIO BARBOSA C...'s submission: | Average Rating: |
I work as the receptionist in a small hotel in the coastline.
Work every day of the week of second fair the Friday fair.
In the final of week I have rest of the work, I go to the park, to the club or the times I go to the movies or to the shoping Center.
And a much tiring work more I like a lot than I do.
Work every day of the week of second fair the Friday fair.
In the final of week I have rest of the work, I go to the park, to the club or the times I go to the movies or to the shoping Center.
And a much tiring work more I like a lot than I do.
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loubycheMochapoints: 2999 | Teacher Score: 742 (0%)Hello Lucio, It's not bad. I will try to correct somes mistakes that I noticed, but actually I'm like you I'm just beginner in english :D: "I Work everyday of second fair the Friday fair. In my weekends I take a rest of the work, I go to the park, to the club or sometimes I go to the cinema or to the shopping Center" Hope I gave you a hand! Keep it up!! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ambroiseMochapoints: 7070 | Teacher Score: 5456 (0%)Lucio, good effort. Nice vocabulary choice too. The first sentence is fine, although you would write "on" the coastline. Then: "I work every day of the week. I'm off on the weekends. That is when I like to go to the park, the club, or sometimes to the movies or shopping. I tend to like more active jobs than the one I have now." (If I understood you correctly.) Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
JocaMochapoints: 691 | Teacher Score: 55 (0%)
Hola Lucio. Puedo ayudarte con mi idioma nativo, el espanol mas no con el ingles pues solo se lo basico de este. Es mejor que te revise tus avances de ingles un nativo de esa lengua. Suerte con el ingles. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
JuzinhaMochapoints: 957 | Teacher Score: 34Weekends are the end of the week. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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