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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 2

Daily Activities

Instructions: Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7:00 a.m. I leave my house for work at 8:00 a.m. I go to sleep after 11:00 p.m.

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i wake up at 10:00am, i wash my teeth, after breakfast, i go to my school at 2:20 pm, in my school study and talk with my friends, after return my house at 7:00pm, the sometimes i go to running in the park,
i goto sleep at 11:00 pm
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  • Kyi Kyi Cho
    Mochapoints: 2450  |  Teacher Score: 708 (0%)

    Use i with capital letter.

    Don't write am like this. Write like this a.m.

    Use only I go to school

    and in my school, I study my lessons and talk with my friends and I come back from school.

    Don't  use I go to running , it is a wrong one.

    Use only I go to run

    Use I go to bed, it is more good than I go to sleep.

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  • marcelo mansill...
    Mochapoints: 13325  |  Teacher Score: 13142 (97%)

    la única duda es la palabra  "goto "  todo lo demas esta bien ....

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  • Lana
    Mochapoints: 6580  |  Teacher Score: 1330

    I ... 10:00 a.m.

    I go to school ... In my school I study and talk ... after the classes I come back to my house. Sometimes, at 7:00 p.m., I go to run at the park. At 11:00 p.m. I go to sleep.

    Good Lala.

     

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