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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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My friend has brown eyes and narrow shoulders. I don't have brown eyes; I have bleu eyes. She has long, brown hair. I have also long hair but blond. She is shorter than I. She has small nose.
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  • sid
    Mochapoints: 5342  |  Teacher Score: 2291 (100%)

    ........I also have long but blonde hair.She is shorter than me.she has a little nose.
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  • GB Fred
    Mochapoints: 120955  |  Teacher Score: 120329 (98%)

    My friend has brown eyes and narrow shoulders. I don't have brown eyes;  I have blue eyes. (My eyes are not brown but blue. - lepszy) She has long, brown hair. I too have long hair¹ but {mine is = I am} blond. She is shorter than I [am}. {She has a small nose. ~ Her nose is small. - lepszy)}

    (I have a folding bicycle (and a racing one).

    # My [only] bicycle is a folding one.)

    ¹I also, have .. = I too have .. = I have .. too = I have .. also
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