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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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On January first i went to the beach. I don´t feel bad beacause i spend time with my friends. In January second i went to the university beacause i had to study.
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  • NickatNight
    Mochapoints: 186  |  Teacher Score: 86 (0%)

    On January first I went to the beach. I don't feel bad because I spend time with my friends. On January second I went to the university because I had to study.

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  • João Bovolini
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    On January first i went to the beach. I don´t feel bad because I spent time with my friends. On January second I went to the university because I had to study.

    Hola Rocio, te felicito!

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  • Marcos Padula
    Mochapoints: 2168  |  Teacher Score: 467 (93%)

    On January the first (On the first of January) I went to the beach.

    I didn't feel bad because I spent time with my friends.

    Obs. Better to put in the PAST TENSE = I felt - I did not = I didn't feel

    On January the second (On the second of January) I went (came back) to the university, because I had to study.

    Best wishes  and Good Luck !

     

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