Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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The young girl does not have a long hair.She has a short hair.
The boy has a black hair. He does not have white hair.
The boy has a black hair. He does not have white hair.
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The young girl does not have a long hair. She has a short hair. The boy has a black hair. He does not have white hair.
We don't use to say this. If we want to describe someone's hair, we just say "The young girl's hair is not long. Her hair is short. The boy's hair is hair. His hair is not white."
首先，在你的每个句子中，都没必要用“a”。
其次，翻译的时候不能根据说汉语的习惯翻译英语。所以，一般来说，The young girl's hair is not long，her hair is short. The boy's hair is black，his hair is not white.这样是比较正常的！