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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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I am a lawyer,when he was a boy my dream was to be a great police officer.
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  • sophie
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    I am a lawyer. When I was a boy, I dreamed of being a great police. actually, you did well
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  • Miryam Rúa Res...
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    ....When I was....
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  • missfer
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    just some details...but keep it up!
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  • nymphetamine
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    Nice work! Keep it up! :D
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