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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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The man had breakfast fifteen minutes ago, now he is going to work.
He is walking to work with his friend. This woman cleaned the room some minutes ago, now she is watching television. He had dinner an hour ago, he is washing his teeth now. And then, he will go to bed. The girl is playing ping-pong now, she finished her homework 2 hours ago. I am talking with my friend on the phone, I called her thirty minutes ago. But she wasn't at home.
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  • Kamran
    Mochapoints: 2040  |  Teacher Score: 1021

    hi, you did very good, just a little as follow: 

    some several minutes ago

    你做得非常棒!继续加油呀!

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  • Don Moore
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    This is excellent. Two notes: better to say "brushing" my teeth than washing unless washing is commonly used where you are. In the sentence "2 hours ago" it is better to write the word if the amount is under ten. For instance: two hours ago.

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  • Kamran
    Mochapoints: 2040  |  Teacher Score: 1021

    hi, you did very good, just a little as follow: 

    some several minutes ago

    你做得非常棒!继续加油呀!

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Mohammad
    Mochapoints: 22780  |  Teacher Score: 5015 (77%)

    Hi

    well done

    I agree with Don moore

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  • inajifa
    Mochapoints: 25459  |  Teacher Score: 6422 (90%)

    good you look follow

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  • Dimas Remígio
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    Good work. I agree with Don.

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  • henry
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    good job。

    keep do it。

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