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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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MY best friend, have gray eyes, he has 1.70 tall, as me, his hair is blond, mine is black,
we are very similars
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  • M
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    Here is my suggestion:

    My best friend, has gray eyes. He is 1.70 cm ,like me. His hair is blond, mine is black. We  look like each other.

    Good.
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  • Elana Kopelevic...
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    My best friend have has grey eyes. He has is 1.70 tall, as like me. His hair is blond, and although mine is black, we are very similar.
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  • Bria27
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    I agree with above, but good work.
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  • bribid
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    I agree with the other comments and I would only repeat what they have said. Take note of their suggestions.  Well done.
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