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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

Rose Santos's submission: Average Rating:
It rained four days.
Today it is rainning and it's cold.
Yesterday was cold and cloudy.
People need warmer clothing, not to feel cold.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • clara jeronimo
    Mochapoints: 46712  |  Teacher Score: 21843 (98%)

    Hi, Rose!

    Very good

    It rained four days. Today it is rainning raining and it's cold. Yesterday was cold and cloudy. People need warmer clothing, not to feel cold.

    Submitted over a year ago
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